Drugs aren't cool, kids. They just make you feel real good.
If she lied during bath time, she could save her mother the tears but, she only lies to spare herself. The psychology of each character is so interesting; having to read into the narrator herself and only gaining perspective through her.
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a great story
Written with feeling
Wow Cora. What a read. Thank you for sharing it with the world. Many blessings, Mon Cherie
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So funny, enjoyed immensely!!
I am proud to work with this man.
He also has the ability to produce the best head shots of any author I have ever seen.
Not looking good here for public interest....
"...the minute he stepped out on that ledge, he knew."
He knew what ?
Those don't sound biased at all ( ;0 ).
I thought that was a sudden & rather inexplicable left turn w/ the death / implied suicide of the "family star" brother.
Call me a hater but this lacked the characterizational skill of the 2nd level winner.
Are there plans to publish any of the other entries ?
I hope so, just to give ppl an idea of what else there was.
I'm sorry, was there a story there ?
What was it ABOUT ?
What I read didn't even quite qualify for the idea of a story.
I hope some of the other entries get printed for comparison purposes. They can't all have been this dismal.
While I found all 3 of these stories to sort of peter out at the end while taking sudden left turns, at least this one had some skill in the writing with character definition lacking in the others.
Well, they obviously goofed badly in not selecting MY entry ! ;0
Seriously though, I did find these stories flawed in an oddly similar way. Each seemed to peter out as they ended.
The 1st took a sudden, unexplained turn in revealing the completely unexplained (& ---what's the opposite of unhinted at ?) death of the protagonist's "star of the family" brother. Then ended as if the author realized they'd neared the word limit.
The 2nd also whizzed around in some unexpected ways as reached it's end, which seemed suddenly much faster paced than the slow earlier sections.
I did find that the story did at least have some realistic & compelling human interest qualities & character definintion lacking in the 1st.
As for story #3...I'm not even sure if story is the right word. Frankly, it didn't even seem to me a complete idea.
This story is fetishistic junk.
Whoever chose this story for publication should be ashamed for indulging the ego of a writer with such a childish ideology.
Terrific work! You ha e amazing talent. I'm so proud of you!
Awesome story; you guys did a great job of picking the first place winner ! Of course, I might
be biased.....Congratulations! I love you :)
Incredibly racists and naive story (third place story)
When will you be accepting applicants for the 2014 competition?
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