I couldn't agree more. A couple other typos I caught:
'And, no shit, Courtney's, like, "Maybeeeee."'
Should be "Maybe."
And "satisfyingggggg" should be "satisfying."
I also think there may have been a couple instances where you accidentally capitalized entire words or sentences.
You forgot to mention that you met Demetri and danced for him.
"There's a real chance she's still behind Rosie's murder. She could have lied about the no heavy lifting - Linden never checked with a doc on that."
Actually, she Linden did say that her Dr confirmed it.
1) I'm going to guess he lives, since Bloody Eyes said "this didn't happen last time," implying that he was on at least his second dose.
2)Semi-related: Why is there only one Bell? Is there also only one Nina? Was this addressed? Did I miss it?
3)I was wondering the same thing. Seems like even accidentally the bell would have knocked against something and emitted some sound.
4)I was thinking that maybe the elements began to separate, once again becoming two distinct heavy elements? Does that make any sense?
5)Yeah, seemed a little dated and pointless. Another question- Walter seemed pretty passionate about restoring his brain for awhile there, and I find it hard to believe that Peter's near-death was enough to put him off it. Is that no longer an option? We needed to turn to reincarnated Belly?
That mortician was so uncool and humorless. And fickle. I'm excited to watch the rest of this!
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